Week 12 MJD
Week 12 he felt really ill Once upon a time there was a boy named Max . Max loved to go outside.But one day he felt really ill so she had to go to the hospital. He had to stay home for a long time till he heard. A really big sound so he went to go see what it was and then he wanted to go see what it was and it was a lot of .Cops so he wanted to see what was happening. Then there was metal everywhere and a lot of people were. Getting hurt till the next day he felt good
Hello Nathan,
ReplyDeleteYour story is the first I’ve had on the 100 WC that included audio...and I enjoyed it! Hearing your a voice added to the mood of the story a lot!
Keeping writing & keep being creative!
Francine (Team 100)
Twin Cities, Minnesota USA