Week 12 MJD
Week 12 he felt really ill
Once upon a time there was a boy named Max . Max loved to go outside.But one day he felt really ill so she had to go to the hospital. He had to stay home for a long time till he heard. A really big sound so he went to go see what it was and then he wanted to go see what it was and it was a lot of .Cops so he wanted to see what was happening. Then there was metal everywhere and a lot of people were. Getting hurt till the next day he felt good
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