Week 12 Caleb

 Week 12 100 word challenge

…he felt really ill…



Conner was playing with his friends. Suddenly he felt really ill. He went home. His mom gave him some soup. Then the very next day his mom called the doctor. The doctor said he just had a cold.  Next day was the day that the carnival was going on. He could not go to the carnival. His mom said you need to rest all day.  A day later he woke up and was feeling better. So his mom let him go to play with his friends. Conner played  with his friends abit. Excited he came back home happy that he got to play.


Comments

  1. Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)November 30, 2020 at 7:45 PM

    Hello Caleb,

    For Connor, it seems he had one of those moments where you can feel very unwell only to feel better after a couple days. It can be amazing a little soup and some rest can make us feel better. This allowed Connor to play with his friend again. Well done.

    I was able to see you used the prompt words very effectively in your story. I hope you can continue to share your writing adventures with others.

    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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  2. UnknownDecember 2, 2020 at 9:04 AM

    Love it

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  3. UnknownDecember 2, 2020 at 9:05 AM

    i like your story Caleb

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