Week12 Cole

 Ten acorns and a hundred year old oak tree lived in the Creaking Forrest. Oak the tree felt really ill, but the the tree was not sick it was on fire! The oak tree screamed “aaaah !” as It burned to the ground. As the little acorns heard the fire crackling they ran away. One of the acorns found a birch tree flag, then from the corner of his eye he saw a squirrel and it ate him. One buried himself to replace Oak. Only eight are left. The eight acorns go to the birch trees and say to them “Take your squirrel back!” and throw the squirrel at them. All the acorns go back to live in their one grown brother after he becomes an oak.

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  1. Hi Cole,
    Well done on your story this week. I like how you have used personification in your story. It reminds me of the burning of the Amazon rainforest.
    Ms Brennock
    Team 100 w/c
    Dublin
    Ireland

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