Week 13 C. A-M

 The night that Santa left me on my bed I was asleep. I woke up at 8:00 I got out of my bed a modest there was a snowglobe on my bright red best it had a bottom it had an in Gavin a 9 render in clothing Rudolph and a red bag rit best a chimney with Santa Going down the chimney you could only see Santa feet sticking with the chime in the snow good there a Christmas tree but not decorate only with black stars and a black mist all around it 

To be continued      


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  1. Mrs BoyceDecember 6, 2020 at 12:31 AM

    Hi A-M,
    I always love snowglobes. It sounds like there's a lot going on in your snowglobe.
    Always read over your writing to make sure it makes sense.
    Keep writing.

    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)
    Cork.
    Ireland

    https://blog.seesaw.me/mrsboyce/#!/

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