Week 13 pupper23

 


“Today is the day”, maddie yelled as the doorbell rang. She opened the door and shrieked with excitement. She told her family, “my doll is here”. It had orange hair, big green eyes and a freekish smile. She named it annie. That night she went to bed hugging her doll and wishing it wasn't time for bed. The next morning she found it on her dresser wearing a tutu.

“I didn't put that on”, she thought loudly. Or put her there. She hugged the doll as she went downstairs to get breakfast. She felt a very sharp pain… :O


Comments

  1. Congratulations on your response to this week’s challenge pupper 23. I liked your careful choice of vocabulary that helped me to visualise what was happening. You left me wondering what had caused that sharp pain - and was it something sinister? I enjoyed reading your writing.🙏

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  2. I like how you explained how the doll looked.

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