Week 13 RP
It was one day until Christmas Eve!
I love Christmas!
It was nighttime.
I heard creeping!
When I woke up, It was Christmas Eve!
I was happy until I went to the tree and saw no presents!
I went back to bed. My Christmas Eve was upsetting!
When It was Christmas, I got everything I wanted and a note from Santa!
It said “Sorry that I didn’t give your presents.
I didn’t remember to put it on the tree.”
After I read the letter, I did a lot of Christmas things with my family.
This was the best Christmas ever!
Maybe you could find other words instead of using I all the time but great job
ReplyDeleteMaybe you could use a other words then a a all the time you did a very good job i love this store a lot
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