Week 14 AS

 Once I was going to the store playing on my phone and then I felt a weird spark go down my spine. As soon as I blinked I was in a scary game, more scarier than anything you've seen.  I screamed but nowone was there to hear me except for animal matronics. I scream and run in terror. I found a merriyanet wearing a ugly dress. Made out of velvet, vines, and junk. I scream and then I run. Bye i say running and jumping. I get out of the phone and then I walk to the store. the end.

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  1. Mrs BoyceDecember 15, 2020 at 11:35 PM

    Hi AS,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
    I think you've been spending too much time playing video games!
    I'm glad you managed to get out of that game.
    Good work this week.


    Wishing a very Happy Christmas to you and your classmates.
    Keep writing in 2021

    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)
    Cork.
    Ireland

    https://blog.seesaw.me/mrsboyce/#!/

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