Week 14 LT

 Once upon a time there was a web monster. No one liked him because you were too Sticky . So one day he went to a Museum Because people like museums. So when he got to the museum He put on one of the dresses in the museum. When it was morning people started running over to him Because he looked interested . Everyone loves the wed monster now .So every day He'll put on a new dress .Put on Christmas Eve Can you put on the prettiest dress of them all The Christmas tree dress.It had Green with pink ornaments.

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  1. Mrs BoyceDecember 12, 2020 at 11:36 PM

    Hi LT,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
    I really liked the idea of the Web Monster and that everyone loves him now!
    And how clever of him to put on a Christmas Tree Dress on Christmas Eve.
    Good work this week.
    Keep writing.

    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)
    Cork.
    Ireland

    https://blog.seesaw.me/mrsboyce/#!/

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