Week 14 Nathan

 


The red dress.


I was walking my dog just beside the pizza shop, so I ate some pizza there. Just then I see a velvet dress with leaves and vines on it, I ran to my house nobody was there. After that terrifying moment I called my friend and told him all about it, and he let me stay at his house. Later that night we heard a bang in the basement, we peeked, the dress was there and that was when we ran fast as an ostrich. I was so terrified that I started to record all of it, just after that...

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  1. Michelle Team 100WCDecember 13, 2020 at 3:20 PM

    Hi Nathan,

    You have described that creepy red velvet dress well.

    You have really built up the suspense. Truly terrifying. I must admit, the last thing I'd be doing would be checking out a bang in the basement, especially in the middle of the night. Yikes!


    Michelle, Team 100wc,
    Melbourne, Australia

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