Week 14 Pupper 23

 As Maddie felt the sharp pain she screamed. She didn't know what to do or what it meant.

She went to her room to look at her back and there was a huge bloody wound. She looked at her doll and its eyes moved back and forth. She screamed so loud she woke her parents up. She went to the basement to put her doll there. Then she found a boney figure wearing a ugly dress in her storage room. She screamed but the vents were too loud for anyone to hear. She went to get a weapon and hit it. But it disappeared...

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  1. Mrs BoyceDecember 15, 2020 at 11:39 PM

    Oh WOW - What an dramatic piece you've written this week.
    I really enjoyed reading it. Well done Pupper 23.
    I'm glad this boney figure disappeared but I really would love to know more!
    Good work this week.


    Wishing a very Happy Christmas to you and your classmates.
    Keep writing in 2021

    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)
    Cork.
    Ireland

    https://blog.seesaw.me/mrsboyce/#!/

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