Week 20/21 Sunshine

    Once upon a time there were kids.  The kids were walking home from school  and they saw an abandoned street. They decided to look in the street and saw a bike tied to a tree. They decided to come here each day from now on to look for clues. They walked home, ate dinner and went to bed. The next day they woke up, grabbed their shoes and out the door they went. They got to the street, touched the bike and zombies came to garud the bike from the kids  when they touched  the bike and ran all the way home.

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  1. AnonymousFebruary 14, 2021 at 12:32 PM

    Hi Sunshine,

    This week's 100 WC prompt was a unique one--and you rose to the challenge! Your writing was fun to read! One suggestion I have is including an adverb like "suddenly" or "in an instant" to transition to a surprise like the zombies coming out to guard the bike. :)

    Keep writing!
    Francine (Team 100)
    Twin Cities, Minnesota USA

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