Week 21 RJ

 One day I was walking down a beach and saw a sailboat.  The sail looked like a… PIRATE SAIL!  I checked the ship and there was a bottle of rum, a pirate hat, a sword and a gun with only one shot.  I woke a man with crazy hair.  He said “ Who are you?”  I said “ Who are you?”  He said “ I am Captain Jack Sparrow!  Are you a pirate?”  I  said “  yes!”  I picked up the bottle of rum, but it was heavier than I expected!  I drank the bottle of rum and the crew was mad at me! 

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  1. UnknownFebruary 23, 2021 at 8:34 AM

    I feel like you used I a little to much try to find other words to transition! But I loved your story! Good job!

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  2. UnknownFebruary 23, 2021 at 8:36 AM

    Wow I love you you did not only use narrator talk. The story is also funny!

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