Week 28 Jiya

  A lion was the king of the jungle. He was not a good person because he would be very rude to the  animals in the jungle! He would make the animals his servant, steal things and more. Then, the day came where the lion king was going to get his crown. “ Do you think you should be king?” said the gorilla who runs the ceremony.  “Yes,” Everybody said no for the lion to be king. The lion started to attack. Luckily the wolf defeated the lion, the wolf became king! The wolf was proud as it let out a pitchful owl. 

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  1. Isabel (Team 100WC)April 25, 2021 at 3:23 PM

    What an imaginative story, Jiya! Fabulous use of punctuation to help express your characters' thoughts. I love how exciting you made the story, and you managed to explain a lot of detail in a very small space, which makes this is a wonderful short story. Did you know that male lions lie around all day while the female lions hunt for them? I bet they would feel cheated as well if a male lion became king of the jungle just because of his glorious mane!

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