Week 28 Kieran

 Week 28 I was walking in the forest when I heard a rustle far ahead. I walked closer and closer. I looked into the bush and a giant wolf jumped at me. I ran all the way to my barn but it was still chasing me. Did I do something wrong? I ran to the field where I had finished making my glass box. I jumped in and locked the door. Then I started laughing at the hungry wolf. I let out a pitiful howl to aggravate the wolf but for some reason he walked back then charged at the glass and it broke then...


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  1. Francine (Team 100)April 25, 2021 at 1:04 PM

    Hello Kieran,
    What a way to end your story! Your use of words like “rustle” and “aggravate” really added to the mood. Nice job!
    Keep writing!
    Francine (Team 100)
    Twin Cities, Minnesota USA

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